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Five copy resolutions for the New Year
Deborah Block and Paul Karps

December, 2010

Since we’re on a bi-monthly schedule for our Copy Corner column—which means our next piece won’t run until February—we thought this would be the best time to offer our list of New Year’s resolutions when it comes to writing fundraising copy. Now, granted, this is hardly an exclusive list. We could literally go on and on. (And maybe that should be Resolution #1: Don’t go on and on!) So we’ll try to keep this year’s list to a minimum. After all, there’s always next year.

Anyway, in no particular order, here goes:

1. It’s okay to wear your heart on your sleeve.

Showing emotion in your copy is a good thing. Not being afraid to get personal is even better. In other words, giving your signer the chance to sound like a real, unique individual—writing to another real, unique individual—will only serve to make your copy warmer and more persuasive.

Let’s say, for example, you’re writing for a children’s hospital. Including a reference to how the signer is a mother of two—or grandfather of four—gives you the opportunity to establish a closer bond with the reader, thereby increasing the case for giving. But even if you don’t have that kind of detail available, keep your copy warm and friendly, whatever the actual writing style of the signer may be.

2. Don’t assume donors know what you know.

You may live and breathe the mission of the organization you write for. But your donors may actually be thinking about other stuff. Really. It’s true. So even though you may be sick and tired of that one story you told in your newsletter six months ago—and that’s been on your Web site for four months—your donors probably won’t remember it or may not have even seen it in the first place. If it’s a good story, use it to your best advantage.

The same goes for information about your work. While you don’t want to insult the intelligence of your donor, you just can’t assume she has the depth of knowledge or understanding that you do.

3. Write the copy from the reader’s perspective.

This one’s certainly an oldie-but-goodie . . . and definitely worth repeating. In a nutshell, it’s not all about “you,” the nonprofit. Instead, copy should revolve around the wants, needs, and interests of the reader. That’s why “you”—aka the reader—is considered the most important word in fundraising.

Yet as much as this seems so obvious to most of us, we recently received a four-page acquisition letter from a local nonprofit . . . in which the very first “you” was toward the end of page four when the nonprofit finally got around to asking for money. Just inexcusable. But it happens—time and again.

4. Don’t think email copy should be any less compelling than direct mail.

One misconception we sense is that many people feel email copy needs to be short and sweet. Hey, the thinking goes, these email types have such short attention spans that we can only hold on to them for a brief moment. So keep appeal copy to a bare minimum. Of course, if you take this advice, you’re just as likely to suck all the air out of the appeal—making the case for giving that much less compelling. Indeed, could this be a factor in the finding that direct mail continues to outperform email?

On the other hand, some of the most effective fundraising emails we tend to receive are longer in length, quite comparable to the length of direct mail appeals.

5. Target your copy to the proper audience.

In writing fundraising copy, one size does not fit all. If you’re writing to donors, you need to thank them. If they’re lapsed, thank them for their past generosity and ask them to reaffirm their support. If they’re high-dollar donors, step up the praise. If they’ve given to a capital campaign or other specific effort, single them out. And if they’ve never given to you before, make that abundantly clear, as well.

More and more these days, we seem to be writing multiple copy platforms—targeted to these kinds of different audiences—that can then be lasered on page one (including personalized gift strings or other individualized fields). Page two is written in such a way that it applies to everyone equally. It can then be preprinted, probably saving you a few bucks in production.

That’s it for this year. Five’s a nice round number, don’t you think? At least that’s what our friend Fibonacci says!

Copywriters Deborah Block and Paul Karps are partners in BK Kreative, 1010 Varsity Court, Mountain View CA 94040, phone (650) 962-9562 begin_of_the_skype_highlighting              (650) 962-9562      end_of_the_skype_highlighting, email bkkreative@aol.com.

Reprinted from Mal Warwick's Newsletter - December 2010



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